my poem about the beach
Saturday, January 16, 2021
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Kia Ora Indiana,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this poetry activity as I love reading and writing poems and summer is my favourite season!
I think your poem is awesome, you stuck to the summer theme well and what you could hear, feel and see during a summer day and it is great to hear that you are spending heaps of time at the beach!
Could you also complete the slides and highlight all the correct sound words and do you think you could try and upload a video of your own featuring your summer sounds or to step it up you could include a screencastify of you reading your poem.
Happy Holidays, Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates