Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 15, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Indiana,
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice idea to ask mum what she needed done. You would have really helped mum by picking up your toys and doing the vacuuming.
What other jobs have to done for mum?
hi mrs wright thanks for the comment from Indiana.
DeleteHi Indiana
ReplyDeleteFirstly you look very happy vacuuming.
What a good idea to do a job that needs to be done.
What id your mum say when you finished and have you done any more jobs?
hi mrs simanu thank you for the commennt i am sad that you are leaving school from Indiana.
DeleteHi Indiana
DeleteI will miss you too. Thanks for the lovely card that your mum emailed me.
Hi Indi,
ReplyDeleteKa Pai to your writing. Good planning and that meant a good recount.
How is the housework help going now? Have Mum and Dad got a roster going? Mr Roach and I take turns cooking dinner.
Hi Indi
ReplyDeleteI love the photo! I agree with Mrs Simanu you look super happy doing the vacuuming! Your recount was very clear I like how you used first, next and then. Great job!
Rachel.
hi indi it is good to know at our house we have a good little helper around the house.
ReplyDeletethank you.
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