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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Creative writing with adjectives

Here is my story and brainstorm.




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2 comments:

  1. Melissa LoverApril 22, 2020 at 7:37 PM

    Hi Indi
    What a great job you have done this week with writing . I can see that you have used well thought out adjectives within your writing. I look forward to hearing you share your story tomorrow :)

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  2. Michelle WrightApril 23, 2020 at 10:19 AM

    Hi Indiana,

    What an lovely story to read. I like that you called your sloth Dreamy. It is a well thought out name for a slow sloth. What happened when Scruffy and Dreamy they got out of the forest?

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