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Wednesday, May 6, 2020

Persuasive writing. Children should be allowed to eat ice cream every day.



1 comment:

  1. Hi Indi
    You have been working hard on your persuasive writing. Your writing is really well organised with first and second ideas and a great conclusion. I could definitely eat icecream everyday.

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